Monday, September 3, 2018

Moisture Of Empathy Comments

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I have understood questions you ask,
Our eyes tear when you are ignorant,
When you divert your face from father
And you run so far in opposite direction
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Heather W.B. 08 June 2020

This is very much important to feel others and understand accordingly. When we have moisture of empathy we have true wisdom of God within. In living society we should have knowledge of feelings others and their emotion. We have to serve selflessly to every creature.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 September 2018

A wonderful poem superbly penned. Yes, no material thing gives joy that we need. It is in God's wisdom that we draw our happines A great spiritual write full of wisdom.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 September 2018

CONTD What can one do without money who can say with confidence deprive yourself the luxury what is it to me or anybody But have faith we all live to die happily But then will we know what happiness was May I ask

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 September 2018

ASK the rich folks with tonnes of money what is joy and how they enjoy folks who have little or none only bask in the glory of what could be all in theory they haven't seen half of the world many have not gone beyond their home lanes and yet speak of wisdom it will come from heaven Hope it does soonly many don't know many things..Money today as over the ages has become the key to even heaven a comfortable burial and incineration

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Valsa George 03 September 2018

This indeed is a lovely write so logically and wisely enumerated! I agree with you fully! No material thing or the great inventions of Science and technology can give us lasting happiness! God's love alone can satiate our longings and offer us true delight and peace of mind! Top marks!

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Dylan Chris 03 September 2018

This poem is absolutely beautiful. I love such poem. I agree with Petals entirely. This is a moisturizer poem for humanity. Readers should read such a lovely poem. You are a mysterious poet.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 September 2018

Basic needs must be fulfilled, only then we get the value of inventions. Nicely depicted in the poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 September 2018

elated verse- Can you go to market and buy love And buy a cup of pace and a plate of joy? ...(and self ecstatic word) When soul drinks a drop of God's wisdom, /// great writing

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Bri Edwards 03 September 2018

(cont.) at first i thought a parent was speaking of a son (or daughter) who has left home in search of something, and who has not succeeded in finding love, peace, or joy. then you move to an analogy re H2O which i don't think i quite understood, but you connect 'empathy' to water? symbolism is OFTEN 'over my head' aka i don't understand it. then you move on to God and another analogy to water/moisture. it's an interesting piece even if i don't understand it all. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 03 September 2018

(cont.) but i disagree with some of it. some things money can buy (some of which are 'inventions') CAN and DO bring JOY/happiness to people, ......though it may not bring lasting happiness, OR one may use up all their money to buy continued happiness. it's ok if one has ENOUGH MONEY! (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 03 September 2018

And buy a cup of pace and a plate of joy? did you mean to type peace? i'll take 2 cups of peace, please! ! ! :) some favorite lines: By money we get inventions, no joy, Can you go to market and buy love And buy a cup of pace and a plate of joy? (cont.)

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Muzahidul Reza 03 September 2018

The moisture of empathy is fantastically penned in your wonderful poem, thanks for sharing

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Rini shibu 03 September 2018

Wow wonderful philosophical poem..Drink a drop of God's wisdom for eternal happiness and joy

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Robert Franklin 03 September 2018

You Indians are very mystic in nature. You have greatness in your mind. How you get such wonderful idea this amazes us. Yes we need to drink water not vapor and ice. This poem has deep philosophy inside.

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The Muse 03 September 2018

You have discovered the elixir for happiness.

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Dogma Daniman 03 September 2018

Wow! you have moistened my heart writing such a lovely poem. Yes, we need to drink water for body and wisdom of God for soul. A great philosophical poem is written by a great poet from India. This spiritual poem is full of wisdom to learn. We gain ability by God's grace. Amen!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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