Monday, November 6, 2017

Mohabath Comments

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Thadaptha hein ye dil mera aapki mohabat mei
Dadaktha hein ye dil mera aapki dadkanome
Jalakhtha ye dil mera aapki shararathose
Zindagi aapne khushiyose jo bari
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Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

Aapki mohabat meh mein pagal jo bangayi Aapki bahome marmitu yehi hein gwayish bas abhi /// Oh love there is fully blind

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, Wow! You have good command on Hindi as well. Do continue writing...

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Sure wiiI try.. Thanks

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Rahul Shil 15 November 2017

Nothing Bad Dear Rini.... bahat acha hoya ha....really... so nice.... Thadaptha hein ye dil mera aapki mohabat mei Dadaktha hein ye dil mera aapki dadkanome Jalakhtha ye dil mera aapki shararathose

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Rini Shibu 15 November 2017

Thanks Rahul... Rini

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Rahul Shil 15 November 2017

Hmm welcome

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Akhtar Jawad 08 November 2017

Translating it for those who don't know Hindi, Love My heart is restless, I’m in love with you Joint beats are endless, I’m in love with you You filled my life with a joy I never had Reflected in your naughtiness, I’m in love with you I never knew you are a pied piper, a magician, No more gloominess, I’m in love with you I love to be crazy in your love, sweetheart, In your arms a recess, I’m in love with you

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Rini Shibu 08 November 2017

Thank you so much Akhtar for translating this poem.. Really beautiful lines

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Rahul Shil 15 November 2017

Rini's poem Mohabath -in hindi which you are translate in English... these is so beautiful... really so beautiful...

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Binayakumar Mohanty 06 November 2017

Nice writting in Hindi dear Rini.You can do the best.Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 07 November 2017

Thanks Binaya for reading and commenting

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Muzahidul Reza 06 November 2017

Tarap tarap ke is dil se aha nikal te rahi, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , mohabath par ose gana likha, ......... Mohabath is an excellent poem Zindagi aapne khushiyose jo bari Aapneye kya jadu hein kiya, wonderfully written, thanks for sharing,10

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Rini Shibu 07 November 2017

Thanks Reza. For your lovely comment

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 06 November 2017

Aapki mohabat meh mein pagal jo bangayi Nice thought

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Rini Shibu 07 November 2017

Thank you so much Soumya.. Glad that you liked

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2017

Dear Rini, I am astonished that you have successfully presented in hindi. The following lines are fantastic.. Thadaptha hein ye dil mera aapki mohabat mei Dadaktha hein ye dil mera aapki dadkanome Jalakhtha ye dil mera aapki shararathose Thank u Rini for posting in hindi language for first time.

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Rini Shibu 07 November 2017

Thank a lot Kumar for your encouraging words

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