Mohabath Poem by Rini Shibu

Mohabath

Rating: 5.0

Thadaptha hein ye dil mera aapki mohabat mei
Dadaktha hein ye dil mera aapki dadkanome
Jalakhtha ye dil mera aapki shararathose
Zindagi aapne khushiyose jo bari
Aapneye kya jadu hein kiya
Gam nahi eis dil meh dubara piya
Aapki mohabat meh mein pagal jo bangayi
Aapki bahome marmitu yehi hein gwayish bas abhi

Monday, November 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just tried to write in hindi.. My first attempt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 28 October 2020

Aapki mohabat meh mein pagal jo bangayi Aapki bahome marmitu yehi hein gwayish bas abhi /// Oh love there is fully blind

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 January 2018

Hi Rini, Wow! You have good command on Hindi as well. Do continue writing...

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Rini Shibu 09 January 2018

Sure wiiI try.. Thanks

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Rahul Shil 15 November 2017

Nothing Bad Dear Rini.... bahat acha hoya ha....really... so nice.... Thadaptha hein ye dil mera aapki mohabat mei Dadaktha hein ye dil mera aapki dadkanome Jalakhtha ye dil mera aapki shararathose

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Rahul Shil 15 November 2017

Hmm welcome

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Rini Shibu 15 November 2017

Thanks Rahul... Rini

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Akhtar Jawad 08 November 2017

Translating it for those who don't know Hindi, Love My heart is restless, I’m in love with you Joint beats are endless, I’m in love with you You filled my life with a joy I never had Reflected in your naughtiness, I’m in love with you I never knew you are a pied piper, a magician, No more gloominess, I’m in love with you I love to be crazy in your love, sweetheart, In your arms a recess, I’m in love with you

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Rahul Shil 15 November 2017

Rini's poem Mohabath -in hindi which you are translate in English... these is so beautiful... really so beautiful...

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Rini Shibu 08 November 2017

Thank you so much Akhtar for translating this poem.. Really beautiful lines

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Binayakumar Mohanty 06 November 2017

Nice writting in Hindi dear Rini.You can do the best.Thanks for sharing.

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