Saturday, September 2, 2006

Modus Vivendi Comments

Rating: 4.6

Would you please just hold my hand,
When I cry out for this land,
Where such evil reigns, and hate
Meets a man at his own gate.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 25 August 2008

A really great poem Ernestine, top marks again. Love Andrew x

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Alison Cassidy 16 September 2006

Ernestine, You demonstrate here how important the poet is in the process of promoting peace in the world. Excellent title too, it really hooks the reader in. Congratulations. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Tailor Bell 02 September 2006

please let me know when you run for office...so I can back you with my vote. nice work. -Tailor

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nn mn 02 September 2006

A nice desire, but unrealistic to expect the whole world to thus behave. It is up to us in each corner of the world to act accordingly - and hope that by our example others will see the way of righteous behavior. Not trying to rain on your poem. To the contrary, the spreading of your sunshine will take place by our own actions, in addition to any of our writings. GOOD CREATION! 10, of course!

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Steve Hagget 02 September 2006

Agree with what's been said by Duncan, etc. For one, I enjoyed reading it and second it was really well crafted - good work

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Duncan Wyllie 02 September 2006

Dear Ernestine You know how this felt to write it, take little heed of those that can not see I agree whole-heartedly with Frank, well said Love duncan X

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 September 2006

Heartstriking piece, Ernestine, and a work of skilled Craftsmanship more than worthyof aPerfect (10) Rating, as opposed to the disgracefull, Envious actions of one who's membership here does not merit authenticity nor the rights that go along w/ membership.Great Work, Ernestine! ''''''''''''''''''''''Frank James Ryan, Jr.

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Scarlett Treat 02 September 2006

This is a beautiful poem that show not only your love for your fellows but your fears as well. So, Dear friend, consider your hand held.

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