Thursday, February 5, 2009

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I don't know what pushes our world in circles.
What causes the sun to turn old.
I don't care to know how the stars are standing,
How the moon wept
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gabriella mendoza
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Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

Ahhh.... This is stunning. Terribly sad... But it is in its honesty and the revealing of your silver secrets... That it mended so sweet... So terribly, hurtfuly, sweet. I loved it. Because even me, just reading it, felt the loss.

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Emancipation Planz 11 March 2009

I don't know what pushes our world in circles.... This forceful opening line caused me to press against its circumference and travelate slouched on a couch.. recapturing many phrases over... Thank you! !

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