Wednesday, September 16, 2020

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‘Father! Tell me. Am I made of clay? '
‘Yes, my dear, you are.'
‘But water runs off my arms and legs
It does not wash the clay,
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Ravinder Kumar Soni
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Suresh Kumar Ek 24 October 2020

As this poem Life is puzzling

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Varsha M 16 September 2020

Yes at times it really becomes difficult to explain the truth to little innocent being. A beautiful. Conception. My dear son, the clay you are made of is so fine That it is invisible to you and me, It does not fall off while you bathe.' The child believed these words, He did not yet know he was a modification of himself....a better version a better clay.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 16 September 2020

Father are you made of clay Yes my son thats why i m gay The son looked up from his bay Shocked he had nothing to say Just got inspired to write this. Yeah kids must ask " Questions" and fathers the best is to use science to explain. Good poem Sir.

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