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A nice poetic imagination, Jasbir. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Covered from head to toe, Black Hijab over bright, shiny dresses, With innocent, wonder-filled eyes, Lips stretched into wide smiles, These little girls, .. . I often think about them. These little girls are innocent really and they have no freedom. It is the clear picture of the present society. The Triple Talaq is much painful really. Dear madam, you have painted here a clear picture of the present society with nice penmanship. Thanks for sharing.

The poem does not portray only the scene before the poet's eyes but also presents a harsh commentary on the social system which is there to ensnare these innocent little girls through so many evil practices when they grow up. Thanks, Jasbir ji.

Heartiest congrats for inking a poem on a horrible social custom perpetrating cruelties and injustice.