Tuesday, January 5, 2016

Modernity Comments

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There is a new community
This new community knows no night
The new community is fast and very smart
The new community is tireless
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DOMINIC PREMPEH
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Ripper Jones 05 January 2016

Very nice poem Prempeh. Every line counts. A poem to be expanded upon I think, so an 8, Happy New Year.

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Prempeh Dominic 05 January 2016

Thanks Stuart, yes it can be expanded...and I will. I promise you.

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