Sunday, July 5, 2015

Modern Technology Comments

Rating: 4.0

Modern technology is great when it works
If you can handle all the buggy quirks
Patience is key when dealing with the conveniences
When pushing all the right buttons takes geniuses
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Darlene Walsh
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Ashira 28 September 2021

Is there an poetic language for this poem? , I wonder what is it

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Khairul Ahsan 18 April 2020

'Visiting friends belongs to the days of horses' - I think, it's not really so. You need personal touches, hugs, etc to be truly 'in touch'. Connection through internet and social media is also good, but it's no substitute for a personal visit. However, I appreciate both your observation and imagination of modern technology, as described in the poem.

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janice 11 June 2019

wow this is truely a masterpiece i must say tears were falling down my cheeks, truly touching. my perception of the world has shifted into a new light.

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Bri Edwards 15 June 2017

a genius i'm not! Anything you need to know is on the internet And everything is accurate, it's a sure bet......................how MUCH do you want to bet! ? i got a chip implanted in my shoulder. i now have a chip ON my shoulder. nice rhyming and essay about teknologie. wait. i gotta check the spelling on Google. some subtle humor to boot! bri :) i'll like this for a showcase, madam. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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