Friday, May 24, 2013

Modern Society Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her beauty on the carpet of youth having a jive
Like honey drips in spring from the waxy hive
What Youth but infirm, all are dying for a drop
Carelessly with hellish gait moved without prop
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Aadil Masood 01 June 2013

We are in the era of male dominated society. We need change. A nice poem.

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Patricia Grantham 31 May 2013

A good write. Society has turned the other cheek on the right way to treat women. Women have often gotten treated unfairly. Society is not as modern as it is supposed to be. Thanks for sharing.

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David Wood 27 May 2013

A thoughtful poem. We have to treat all women with respect.

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Vishal Sharma 26 May 2013

nice topic to write a poem on sir, do read my poems and comment if you find it fair to read poems of a seventeen years old boy.

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Vishal Sharma 26 May 2013

nice topic to relate i appreciate u sir plz read my poems too and comment if you find it fair for reading the poems of a seventeen years old boy thanks.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 May 2013

much dirt society has accepted, beautifully you have presented my dear poet, thanks a lot.10

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Wahab Abdul 24 May 2013

the first line... along with the first stanza stands unmatched...great and cracking poem..10 marks..

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