*modern Art- Senryu Comments

Nebulous beauty Buried in senseless symbols Frames a modern art! great senryu 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

wonderful senryu made......great art framed! ! !

It's amazing how in so few words you can say so much. This describes abstract art well. Thanks for sharing.10+

It is an art for the artists only...confusing for the rest....but a good pastime hunting a treasure out of it.....interesting

you do have a point there...modern art confuses me!

i liked it. write more shan

see through artists vision beauty, comes alive, through the frame. dear vaibhav, modern art has many dimensions, and it keeps you guessing! this is a lovely write, and i enjoyed reading it.......ritty

a satirical take on the unecessary additions included in modern art

interesting and impressive cute...with depth with sweet appeal to readers beautiful 10+++ maia

Beautiful 10+

Well, now i know why you did not bother to leave me the title....And i like it...I see that you have also employed the strict syllabic requirement of Traditional Zen Haiku, which indicates your true respect for both Asian poetic styles which in fact are ONLY seperated by theme...ans otherwise the adherence to the Haiku metre is strongly suggested...tho' too frequently ignored...Kudo's to you my friend...And, despite what you may here...and worse...what you may see on this free-for-all site......THERE ARE RULES & STRICT REQUIREMENTS TO MOST NON-FREE VERSE FORMS OF POETRY! FjR

A very good definition of modern art...satirical

hahhaaa! ! ! ! ! superb.....

Excellent satire. I prefer the classic approach both in art and in life.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

I have just found out my Haiku is Senyru! So now, I can enjoy it like I am reading yours! I know what you mean about modern art! Modern artists can use it for their own therapy, but more often than not, they can't relay the message to others. Important words for a misunderstanding of art. 10 Karin Anderson

Thank you for sharing this with me. The style here, is new to me The theme here is so clear to me. Cute and sweet I should say... This style is great.

a write that shows your merit writing poems.10 shan

The words are chosen precisely and sound perfect. The whole sense comes through clearly!

well i dont know much difference between a senryu and haiku but whatever your poem is a nebulous beauty a tenner from me anjali

This is a well conceived and excellently written Senryu poem, Vaibhav. It is such a refreshing pleasure to see a poet who knows the difference between a haiku and a senyru for a change! Your syllable count is flawless in each line, and your closing line puts that one thought into the reader's minds, as all good haiku and senryu poetry is supposed to do. Carl.