Monday, January 12, 2009

Model Appearance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Chiffon shimmer through the glare
A flashgun marks each pose
Forwards, backwards, turn and stare,
A wilting wasted rose.
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Martin O'Neill
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Gone Away 16 March 2010

Hard hitting with some killer lines. Great writing!

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Fiona Davidson 21 January 2009

wow...brilliant insight into the world of glamour....thank you...Fi

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Ian Bowen 13 January 2009

Martin, your poem was one of the best that I have read on this subject matter. Thanks.10/10 Regards, Ian

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LOVEFOOL Aka 12 January 2009

Biting and cynical, A very powerful and meaningful piece 10+

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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