Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Mocking Moon Comments

Rating: ★0.0

Oh why moon do you mock me,
up so high and far away,
bickering all night with your friends,
shining down on my lonely array,
...
Read full text

Javier Falcon
moon shine Friends
COMMENTS
Cassandra Jasmine 20 August 2013

Beautifully written; I love the phrasing, the way you use the words, and the strong structure. Bravado! I also feel how sometimes the moon might tease us humans. My only concern is the capital letters; but that's just a trifle little thing. Again, beautiful writing. Keep it up! ;) Cassandra Jasmine

0 0 Reply
Load More...
Javier Falcon

Javier Falcon

Miami, Florida
Javier Falcon
Javier Falcon
Miami, Florida
Poet's Page Poems More
Close Activity Quotes Biography Comments Following Followers Statistics My Profile Add New Poem Add New Quote
Poemhunter.com
 Best Poems Best Member Poems Best Classical Poems New Poems New Poets Best Member Poets Best Classical Poets Explore Poems Explore Poets Poem Of The Day
Poems About
 Love Poems Baby Poems Death Poems Sad Poems Birthday Poems Wedding Poems Nature Poems Sorry Poems Hero Poems Poetry E-Books
Best Poets
 Robert Frost Maya Angelou William Shakespeare Pablo Neruda Langston Hughes Emiliy Dickinson Shel Silverstein William Blake Rabindranath Tagore William Wordsworth
Best Poems
 Phenomenal Woman Still I Rise The Road Not Taken If You Forget Me Dreams Annabel Lee Caged Bird If Fire And Ice On The Death Of The Beloved
Poem Hunter App Store
PoemHunter Facebook PoemHunter Twitter PoemHunter Instagram
About Us Copyright notice Cookie Policy Privacy Statement Contact Us Help Report Error Is Poem Hunter a legit site? Is Poem Hunter safe? Comunity Rules Privacy Policy Legal Terms Of Use

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

7/27/2025 7:34:17 AM # 1.0.0

Close
Error Success