Saturday, February 14, 2009

*mockery From The Stars Comments

Rating: 2.9

The moon sits in silence, ever so cold.
So many feelings are left untold.
The mocking stars have deserted the moon.
Leaving it standing alone, at night and even noon.
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Shelby Renee
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Rick Adriolo 29 January 2013

This poem really touched me.. it's awesome.. i was searching randomly for stars hitting randomly I believe page 33 and found your poem.. it made my day! Love it!

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~ Jon London ~ 07 August 2009

brilliantly written and expressed lines of longing....I really don't know how I missed this first time round....but I'm so glad I found it....it's beautiful Shelby....you continue to expand with each new and exciting piece my lovely....keep them coming....10

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