Mocker, Minder, Me: I Saw A Maid I Knowth Not Comments

excellent. keep writing. thanks

Succinct and a good turn of phrase at the end with some drama.

Immediately, i felt like a mister The Mocker saw me, defeated he ran; very good poem. saving a girl from being.......... used by other........ you become powerful in context and jump up to save....... thank you. you are a real man. thank you. tony