Mock Orange Comments

Insightful and brilliant lines

Each to their own I say! Personally I enjoy it but at a deeper level I really don't know why I enjoy it. I am driven by my libido that's all I know.

Well done! What a great take on , love the scents I felt like I could almost smell them.

Excellent honest poem based upon the reality of everyday. Enjoyed much!

Well, what odor? The smell of war or the masculinity she can't stand? A real 'guess-what-where' is this simple poem. Still a 5 Star full score! I really enjoyed this 'guess it' poem.

How can I rest? How can I be content when there is still that odor in the world? //Happiness and natural desire of life all are in the loving fragrance that agitates the inner soul; lovely poem penned

Great ideas I experience from this very small poem my dear friend Louise Gluck.

I hate them. I hate them as I hate, the man's mouth sealing my mouth, the man's paralyzing body very good poem facts of life. tony

This is fantastic poem...10++