Wednesday, July 11, 2018

Mo Comments

Rating: 5.0

Watching this wonderful universe
And comparing cosmic time period,
Human lifespan on Earth is nothing,
This is mo, of course mo we feel,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Efran Menny 06 October 2020

By God's grace having long journey is vey nice. You have interestingly expressed thought.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 July 2018

A profound piece of work on life brilliantly penned. The last stanza conveys an.affirmation faith. Loved the great wisdom embedded in this wonderful write.10 ++++

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Hans Vr 12 July 2018

I love the wisdom in this poem. The relativity of time and our life. Many are afraid of death, but if this body would be immortal, it would be not pure bliss. Excellent poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 July 2018

As compared to trillions in sense, Hundred years of lifespan is nothing.....well said! A magnificent piece of work! (10)

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2018

This wonderful Universe! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 July 2018

Such an excellent poem, Kumarmani...10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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