Friday, September 25, 2020

Mizzle Miracle Comments

Rating: 4.5

Slipping out bare foot
As the showers call to abet
Playing the rum-jhum beat.
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Varsha M
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Khairul Ahsan 25 September 2020

'Stood my soul spellbound with mizzle magic' - the picture says so!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 September 2020

A girl in a wet sari what one wants more......

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M Asim Nehal 25 September 2020

Brilliantly written. Drops of rain dripping and bare foot splash, making paper boat and enjoying the water is something we all miss specially with Corona around sneezing and coughing is banned. Awesome poem

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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 September 2020

Great poem. The mood is just right in the poem. Great work. Imsges metsphors and all

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 September 2020

Wow! A beautiful poem... just beautiful!

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Sharad Bhatia 25 September 2020

A Magnificent poem about shower. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem. 100*****

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