Thursday, July 29, 2010

Mix Into Yourself A Little Bit Of Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

Mix into yourself a little bit of me
To make a fine blend, and serve it unto thee
Feels sad while playing the game of love
Hands clasped in hope, praying to the one above
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Venkatesh Jagannathan
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Satan Esquire 08 August 2010

The feeling of being inside you is a beautiful thought, like a log in a deep, dark, peaceful hollow. I will take this poem to bed with me tonight. Thank you.

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there is a poet in me! 04 August 2010

really nice....its a beautiful poem... enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 August 2010

‘Time tested faith and belief, that shall not wither with age’ ~ Sir your 2nd poem I read all oozing/spilling love for bygone days…so much hurt may be inside...so why so much ‘wrung-heart’ delivery = wording …geriatric passion …excellent …must read for all...I suppose… … thanks Sir for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Prasanna Kumari 29 July 2010

THERE IS POETRY IN YOU.....no doubt about it....this is a very powerful poem with love and truth in it....anybody can enjoy this

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Venkatesh Jagannathan

Venkatesh Jagannathan

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