Mitigation Comments

Oh, the last line is awesome, I hope one day to write like this.

Dear Madam, This one is really nice poem with peaceful thoughts. I liked it very much. Thanks for your encouragement and comments on my poem. Please keep your blessings with me. May God grant you perfect health.

An excellent poem. On reading it I am reminded of the adage ' As you sow so you reap.' With every that we put forth we also have to assess the foot we planted earlier.

your last stanza is excellent My favorite. great writing you are very talented writer

Very nice indeed. Simple and beautiful.

, We cannot watch the ruts behind, flaws appear althrough our lives, many thankfully are forgotten or remembered in a haze over time, Thank you for the invite to read. very much enjoyed.

Great poem written from deep insight and experience

A great poem full of insight and depth, so original and thought provoking! I loved this poem!

I love this poem! ! Everything moves and sways even if we don't want it too

A great simplicity, yet great depth. You are a marvel, for any age. I really enjoy and appreciate your well penned writings. Just keep on. Much was told in those first two lines