Monday, March 5, 2012

Mitchell Wilson's Gone Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nobody heard the pleas of his cries
Especially the once that led him to die
Nobody bothered to keep him in safe
Eroding his faith that there'd be better days
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Kaila George 10 June 2012

Children can be so cruel with out even knowing why, its just a norm of todays society, you tease, you bully, you ignore the pain in their eyes, whats so sad for today is that its a normal part of everyday life, when did we get to be so cold to childrens plights. This is indeed a brillant write on the insight of society that often ignores a cry for help. (crys)

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Eric Cockrell 06 March 2012

we have forgotten to teach our children respect... and yet are appalled when this type of inhumanity happens.... a great and moving poem!

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Pheko Motaung 05 March 2012

A brilliant poem tinged with sadness! A fantastic read.Thank you very much

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Poet Of The River 05 March 2012

how sad... I have been so close to...that. I know what it is like. I fight every day to keep my chin up and look forward to tomorrow.. My mother on her death bead and my dad a alcoholic in the making..... life is not all that worthy right now. i understand how the young boy felt. good poem.

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Poet Of The River 05 March 2012

how sad... I almost went down that road not to long ago... it is sad that someone so young would be pushed to something lie that. good job on the poem. it has a strong emotion to it.

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