When I whisper your name
So serene and pure,
When I bow my mortal head
And kiss your divine feet,
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This is Great i love the flow to it.. Great work ~Krista~
Wow Dr Sahib.... There are many cures of sickness but threr sint no cure for love... well written brother 10/10
Powerful composition indeed! Compact eloquence that captured a lot. Praiseworthy your memory's observation! 10++++
very beautiful and strong write shah sahab, a poem which is so easy to understand with a lot of sweetness and a bit of bitterness....you've shown the true thoughts od a lover in this write, the thoughts with so much feelings...bravo, bravo and you say that 'still you are much beyond that I could compare myself with you', those are kind words you said for me instead i think im nothing as compare to you and many great poets here in PH....in thi poem you have put the heart on the palm of the hands which i think is not misunderstoodable, i might be wrong but i loved the flow of this remarkable poem...thanks for sharing this master piece 10+ and A++ added to my favs. rgds asif
Oh..so passionate..but so sad..for it was misunderstood... Hope..it would changed... But..I like this poem..there's the twist..still ringing inside me...thumping my heart... It's beautiful! Great poem!
the simpler the lingo the more the misunderstanding...be alert!
dear kamran...beautiful... true to the core.... please read my poem 'nobody' 10 votes