Sunday, September 27, 2009

Misunderstood Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m not a bad kid just misunderstood
I’m trying to find my way out these woods
I got in something I didn’t mean
Why can’t people try to understand instead of downing me
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Marquel Walker
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Marieta Maglas 28 September 2009

nice abstract poem, very well written, lovely to read................10+++++

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Dr.subhendu Kar 27 September 2009

The sky is not the limit Because you can reach the moon if you try People would never understand my struggle in life But I hope they understand I’m a confused kid trying to do right......stride and stride to reach the moon, as stars in sky may enlistee you.! , well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Obinna Eruchie 27 September 2009

Life is full of complexities, sometimes the circumstances we are in and don't know how to control tend to make us look like outcasts to those who don't understand. Touching.

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