Wednesday, November 4, 2020

Misty Sunshine! Comments

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Manjeshwari P MYSORE
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Manjeshwari Poet 26 November 2020

well..Sorry I wasn't able to read some of your comments and poems..some problem with the websiteI guess.. well..I read ''Mona Lisa Ghost Smiles In Aerial Perspective'' and ''Misty Mona Lisa Personified Dawn''. So..it makes 8 poems dedicated to me....Thanks for the Honour..I am humbled and Honoured..

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Manjeshwari Poet 26 November 2020

my 4 lines Quatrain " Misty Sunshine " inspired you to write 8 poems.. " Mist Arises Dawn Born " .." A Misty Veil Hides Dawn " .." Shy Dawn Flirting Sun Courtship " .." Sun Flashing Bright Smile " .." Dawn Personified A Young Mother Mist Face " .." Mona Lisa Enigma Moon Faced " ..''Mona Lisa Ghost Smiles In Aerial Perspective'' and ''Misty Mona Lisa Personified Dawn''..incredible..

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Manjeshwari Poet 26 November 2020

would be more interesting if you could write one poem with all of it..like Da Vinci's Mona Lisa painting.position of the best in one..just a suggestion.. I also read the two lines written by you in the comment..Inspired by my poem Moonlight Pearls! ..Thanks :)

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Manjeshwari Poet 20 November 2020

Thanks for the Honour..I am humbled and honoured..I am happy that my Poem " Misty Sunshine " inspired you to write 6 poems.." Mist Arises Dawn Born " .." A Misty Veil Hides Dawn " .." Shy Dawn Flirting Sun Courtship " .." Sun Flashing Bright Smile " .." Dawn Personified A Young Mother Mist Face " .." Mona Lisa Enigma Moon Faced " ..6 poems inspired by a Quatrain..incredible.. Good..Thanks :)

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Terry Craddock 26 November 2020

The fun is in the writing :) I think you missed 'Mona Lisa Ghost Smiles In Aerial Perspective' and the complete extended version 'Misty Mona Lisa Personified Dawn'. mist can be inspirational, it leads to so many places, ties in with so many things

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Manjeshwari Poet 20 November 2020

Thanks for the Honour..I am humbled and honoured..I am happy that my Poem " Misty Sunshine " inspired you to write this poem and 5 more poems..6 poems inspired by a Quatrain..incredible..Good..Thanks :)

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Terry Craddock 26 November 2020

Your welcome, I am glad you enjoyed :)

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

I wrote the split image 'Mona Lisa Ghost Smiles In Aerial Perspective', and the poem 'Misty Mona Lisa Personified Dawn', inspired by the poem 'Misty Sunshine! ', by the poetess Manjeshwari P MYSORE and dedicated to Manjeshwari P MYSORE.

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

Mona Lisa Enigma Moon Faced view the horizon line level with dawn's misty eyes linking dawn's misty figure with a dawn misty landscape emphasizing the mysterious enigmatic nature of misty dawn Mona Lisa solemn moon faced has no clearly visible eyebrows or eyelashes mute silent a genteel women plucks eye hairs considered unsightly sows smooth face mist features mist veils retreat fades into future dreams dawn mist dawn waiting for next birth dawn

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

Dawn Personified A Young Mother Mist Face what is dawn personified a young mother to new day a woman sits shadows upright her gaze is fixed on an observer a woman fresh mist dawn alive alive in an unusual atmosphere sitting in no outlines sfumato mist lacking outlines ever fades into background soft blending creates an ambiguous mood corners of mouth corners of mist watching dawn eyes no clearly visible eyebrows eyelashes Dedicated to the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE.

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

Sun Flashing Bright Smile what mist dawn may stay to withstand sun rays withering flashing bright sun smile as sun stretches heat claims a hot new day Inspired by the poem 'Misty Sunshine! ' by the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE. Dedicated to the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE.

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

Shy Dawn Flirting Sun Courtship amidst dawn veils in shy dawn smiles is sun smile flashing amidst dawn teary eyes ambiguous are dawn's fading smile replies Inspired by the poem 'Misty Sunshine! ' by the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE. Dedicated to the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE.

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

A Misty Veil Hides Dawn mist arises dawn born a misty veil hides dawn black ink born world shapes hidden obscured in mist mist mist veils light creeps dances in dawn veils hot orb eye of heaven dawn blinks wakes into warm warmer hot sun rays mist veils retreat fades into future dreams dawn mists dawn waits dawn birth dawns Inspired by the poem 'Misty Sunshine! ' by the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE. Dedicated to the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE.

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Terry Craddock 16 November 2020

Mist Arises Dawn Born a misty veil hides black ink born world dawn shapes hidden obscured in mist mist veils hot orb eye of heaven dawn blinks wakes into warm warmer hot sun rays mist veils retreat fade into future dreams dawn mist dawn waiting for next birth dawn Inspired by the poem 'Misty Sunshine! ' by the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE. Dedicated to the poet Manjeshwari P MYSORE.

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Terry Craddock 05 November 2020

'a smile flashing amidst teary eyes' goes beautifully with the juxtaposition 'Sunshine and Dew always make things lovely' an imagery I have always adored

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Varsha M 04 November 2020

Beauty and Joy fill the lives just as the vast Skies. Yes and that is what we need to hope everyday. Thank-you for penning this hopeful poem.

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