Wednesday, March 1, 2006

Misty Rain Halos Comments

Rating: 3.8

misty rain halos
the traffic lights that
serves as my guide.
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John Kipling Lewis
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K Holoholo 06 November 2007

This one is very good.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

7. Everything works until the last stanza, which is abstract, cliched, and a big clunker. The rest is good. Descriptive, sensory, and concrete.

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John Kipling Lewis

John Kipling Lewis

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