Wednesday, May 18, 2016

Misty-Pi-Ing >>> Comments

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when sky is clear
many wings up there
we wish we have one
to join all their fun
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Manonton Dalan
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Ena N. Mori 19 May 2016

sisters, brothers, friends you and me were roam-free kids starting the morning runs with our moms' sermon: be kind, but be more kind to the most unkind; won't be forgotten in tomorrow's beyond and off we go playing around the pond stomping on muddy fields weaving coconut leaves into small mats you'd give me i remember seeing letters etched on bark of mango tree on the sole of my slippers and one's smile so naughty maybe all of us here should take the time to recall our childhood innocent times to overwhelm jealousy, envy or even defamation for we don't have forever on this good land

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Manonton Dalan 19 May 2016

very nice poem. i love the third stanza it gives me smile...little things that happened still as fresh as sunshine...heheheheh... carved heart on mango tree and writing on slippers slippers...i remember that. fourth one is lovely brotherly/sisterly reminder...yes we should throwback and piece our childhood and hopefully pick those neat happy things to refresh ourself...this we should. thanks for sharing..you're still so great and loving and caring

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Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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