Saturday, July 26, 2008

Misty Mountain Mirage (An Acrostic) Comments

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Mountainous terrain steep
In the Tibetan plateau, where the
Sky almost
Touches the horizon
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Dr John Celes
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Excellent images! ! i felt like I was on the walk up the side of the mountain..this poem is a real treasure... a ten from me..

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Susan Jarvis 26 July 2008

A painting in words. I like your use of 'tired trekking' - this alliterative term conjures up the fatigued plodding of the exhausted mountaineers. A visual delight of an acrostic poem. S :)

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