Dr Pintu Mahakul

Dr Pintu Mahakul

Gandam, Deogarh district, Odisha, India
Wednesday, November 26, 2014

Misty Morning Comments

Rating: 4.8

While we travel in a bus in journey of night,
We wait for early morning to see ray of light.
Crossing far distance of hundreds of miles,
With hope and pleasure a sleepy man smiles.
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Dr Pintu Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 August 2022

I congratulate you! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 August 2022

Heartiest Congratulations Pintu ji, once again, for the honour. God bless.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 August 2022

Dr Mahakul, Congratulations on a very well deserved POD! It's a beautiful tribute to India...and a great gift to the people of the world. As I was reading it, I had memories of such a bus and roads while travelling in Mexico. Thx for those memories!

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Bharati Nayak 10 August 2022

Wow---A great poem well deserving for Poem of the Day! This is a journey full with delight and hope, arriving at the destination to the chimes of temple bells.---It is the beauty of journey from mist to a clear dawn! Congratulations Poet Dr.Pintu Mahakul!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2022

Truly this poem is most deserving as the MPOTD. God's Blessings in Abundance for your future ahead in God's Path

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2022

I must tell you, Dr. Pintu Mahakul, except a famous poet from DEOGARH, Odisha, slowly on, you are constantly famous worldwide. I know you before I knew your dear father, the respected Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2022

I cite the last stanza, with the most beautiful conclusion: Finally we arrive to our long destined new town At that time almost it looks favourable brown. Hearing sound of chanting verse from temple, We thank God walk the street with new ample. Amazing poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2022

First of all: CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, so very happy am I to see this old Classic Poem of your heart be chosen. Of course 5 STARS TOPSCORE.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 December 2021

Part 3. ‘Not to settle down' in one place, that is, "to stay unsettled " is man's destiny.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 December 2021

It is this inquisitiveness that prompts us to travel, even beyond the skies. This poem, I think, is an ode to man's untiring inquisitiveness. Top score, dear poet.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 December 2021

It is man's instinct to travel. Like migratobirds. May be, about ten thousand years back, man had started to build settlements, after the onset of organised agriculture. But, before that, man travelled from places to places. His inquisitiveness.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 November 2021

It's a beautiful poem! Loved reading it.....5 stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 November 2021

This is my second visit to read this lovely poem Pintu ji. I have commented and voted for this poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 November 2021

A beautiful poem that describes a journey from darkness to light. A bus journey of new hope, dreams and light. The arrival of a new dawn is always a pleasure to watch. A spiritual journey of illumination.

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Prafulla Kumar parida 14 September 2021

Bus journey memory is very nice.

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Varsha M 25 September 2020

This is very vivid and descriptive poetry catching every element perfectly. Your poetry actually carried me to time memorial of travel seasons when I use to admire every travel I chose. Beautiful and refreshing.

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M Asim Nehal 02 July 2020

A poem with lots of substance and imageries. I liked the flow of your poem.

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Aarzoo Mehek 24 June 2020

I can visuals the scenario you painted so beautifully. Keep sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2020

Amazaing appearances here from this side. Most scintillating photography, most beautiful! A well deserved Member Poem Of The Day in 2017. Today I stll enjoy this excellent poem from your soul. Thank you so much for sharing. God's Blessings Greatest for you!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 June 2020

Child sun rises with big round face in East, Dancing veil covers and opens made by mist. Smog spreads over and across the road long, Birds fly in row with chirping and sing song...........................................I still enjoy the sun this earliest morn, and still enjoying youyr cute poem, Dr. Pintu Mahakukl.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul

Dr Pintu Mahakul

Gandam, Deogarh district, Odisha, India
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