Sunday, July 12, 2009

Mistrusted Smiles Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the days pass on me with smiles
Now we days are comprised of the sun and me
Standing for each one defended by Giles
On nothing we did disagree
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Mohammed Balchi
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Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

nice extended metaphor: ''and the opening of the doors of my eyes the heart no longer reached the sea'' wonderful poem..10+ from me

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