Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Mistress Of The Sea! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can hear the sound of the waves
Striking the seashore as to crave.

I can see my shadow in moonlight,
...
Read full text

TARA.. Star
COMMENTS
Anjali Sinha 12 June 2009

wowwwww great write does saudi arabia permit you to be that mistress lol

0 0 Reply
Afzal Shauq 03 June 2009

I agree with dear tamara and like these lines very much and really wonderfully done.. I can smell the soft soggy sand, & follow the footprints till the end the whole poem is rich one...well written, and rich in idea... hope you never stop writing poetry...as you have much ability to write more and more..10 +++++

0 0 Reply
Shiza Khan 03 June 2009

i like the flow of the poem.. almost flowed in it. lovely poem :)

0 0 Reply

a lovely poem filled the soft breeze..loved these lines I can wonder there & think so deep, When the rest of the world go to sleep… After all i am a mistress of the sea….

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 02 May 2009

couplets mixed with a single verse done in fine imagery...lovely poem!

0 0 Reply
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 28 April 2009

like the nymphs against the Argonauts..truly spectacular and mesmerizing! amazing poem!

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success