Sunday, February 28, 2010

Mistakes Of My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I made a million mistakes
All through these years,
Still regretting for them
My eyes are full of tears..,
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Manas Barpande
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Packed with pain but also crommed with courage. Well done my friend. There is nothing like learning from mistakes.

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Whispering Rose 28 February 2010

it's very brave to talk of one's own mistakes but it provides a sense of relief too in your poem i found many of my own mistakes as well a well structured poem, keep up the good work

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