Saturday, December 17, 2016

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Ravi A 18 December 2016

He is great because his mistakes didn't cause him to fall - the idea is redundant. He knows how to get over his mistakes and make less and less errors in life. No man, however great, has made no errors big or small. See the sentence. No man, however great, has made errors big or small will convey the right idea. I know that this was what you had intended to say. You may properly edit. Thanks. I appreciate you for one thing. You are able to convey your ideas in just four verses. That is good. Poetry need not be lengthy.

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