Mistakes Comments

This is a very moving poem. It has an spontaneous quality that makes the confession all the more convincing. The sincerity of emotions makes me think there is still hope to salvage the situation But that goes to show how I internalized your poem and want to write a different ending than that which the writer knows is the only possible outcome - and she sums it up in the final word, GOOD BYE. It's especially sad to think earlier the speaker may have given him a poem like MY DARK PRINCE full of idealism and hopes for the long future.

thanks you guys, that means allot read my other poems and tell me what you think

Ah yes regrets. U express yorself in a fine way in a gud poem. I hope u review my latest too.

totally agree with Adheez mistakes leaves regrets we can do nothing for what has been but can learn a lot from them for what is going to be

a mistake leaving regret and there's nothing we can do but learn from it a poem that looks bleak but hides great meaning for me this is an honesty, I can feel it

there is nothing I can do, good write, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.