Tuesday, July 8, 2008

Mistaken Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the rain falls over me, I stand here,
yet you are not currently by my side,
even so I do no longer frustrate myself,
on what might of happen in the past, just think.
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Javier Falcon
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gfsd dsa 10 August 2008

that was good, ur a terrific poet :)

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okay javier, i am someone who always tries to think positive and be happy, but i just cried alittle right ther, no lie, and im not the person to do that, that was amazing, : (

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May Namoc 08 July 2008

-tears up- beautiful. nothing much to say than WOOOHOOO! ! awesome poem. -thumbs up-

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