Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Mistake Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wonder why thunder roars
While the heavy rain pours
Is it to make me close doors
Or to show me its wild gores
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Marieta Maglas 09 October 2009

wonderful descriptive poem, well expressed......10+++++++

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Antonio Liao 08 October 2009

it's a word rewarding....of being so true to life.... very beautiful to reflect... the genuine heart can only see the truth, of the real purpose of existence... i like the way you presented your thought...thank you and God bless... a 10 +

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Catrina Heart 07 October 2009

A very nice poem with nature's link to human beings.......Profound one.......well written piece! ! !

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Louis Rams 07 October 2009

the day we stop wondering is the day we stop breathing.

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Shashendra Amalshan 07 October 2009

This is a very nice poem my friend.. As always i loved the flow of your poems. The rhythm and rhymes are very nice too.. And I liked the expressions you have used here., . very good.. love Shan

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Anju Addanki 07 October 2009

A good meaningful rhythmic poem

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 October 2009

a beautiful rhyming poem...nature does warn and scare us sometimes

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Surya . 06 October 2009

a nice roaring and rhyming poem. voted10 surya

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Eyan Desir 06 October 2009

This poem really kept me pondering Good write my friend 10s

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 October 2009

There are five wonders in this poem, while there are seven wonders in the world, making up to a total of twelve wonders.

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Joseph Poewhit 06 October 2009

Nothing is perfect - except GOD.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 06 October 2009

A good rhythmic piece of inquiry. Liked the verse much.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 06 October 2009

nice phrasology! beautifully detailed! 10+

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Joseph Poewhit 06 October 2009

At least your mind is awake

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