Mistake Comments

The graphic too is very nice. It adequately expresses the remorse of the poet. The one word caption too is represntative of the feelings expressed. Well done!

Loved the feelings of repentance candidly expressed in the poem. Such feelings are congenial to reconcilliation. Loved these refrains: 'Without a doubt, the mistake was not entirely yours But also mine to some extent'. - When either of the differing parties has this kind of remorse, a rapprochement is very much possible. Loved your poem. It gets 10/10 from me. Hope, you would like to have a look at some of mine, and if possible, offer a feedback too.

A masterly written poem! Brilliant!

Lovely poem. The repetition of the refrain just draws me in. Lovely stuff