Saturday, February 21, 2015

Mistake Comments

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I stood by a statue, alone on a beach
A picture was taken for a keep sake
That picture was used as a profile update
It was seen my a woman who wanted to meet
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Stephen Pennell
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2015

Thank you for sharing your ideas.

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Stephen Pennell 23 February 2015

thanks for the remarks lyn, cant do anything about how other people behave ie reason for writing the poem

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Lyn Paul 21 February 2015

I see no mistake made. We all can do with a fresh picture occasionally. Hope the air is now clear. Thank you Stephen

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Stephen Pennell 21 February 2015

thank you for byour remarks true story!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2015

Wonderful poem with nice explanation. Presentation style is good.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2015

Wonderful poem with nice explanation. Presentation style is good.

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Stephen Pennell 21 February 2015

I took a picture on a beach near liverpool cosby the picture was me stood next to a Gormley statue there spread along the beach I have attached a pic but does not seem to show well you can guess the rest.

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