Saturday, May 2, 2009

Mist To Snow Comments

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Mist filled sky.
Lines the canyon walls.
Wipers gliding.
Steady heart beat.
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Thomas Gallegos
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, aryaindia 02 May 2009

Prose is there and poetry format is not seen...yet the message is clear and got across.............lovely lines..........just a little corrections here and there....arya

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