Saturday, April 4, 2009

Mist Of My Agony (Recommended) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I try to remove the black curtains,
I try to shatter the black glass.
I long for the light to touch my skin.
I long for it to remove the crisp coat of the dark.
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Ridah Ellahi
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Muhammad Ali 04 April 2009

nicely written poem Ridah 10

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Milica Franchi De Luri 04 April 2009

It is a good thing that your poem has been recommended or i might not have read it.I loved it. Very interesting.I give it 10.

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Joseph Poewhit 04 April 2009

Like landing from our flight of life and dying.

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Patrick McFarland 04 April 2009

You touch something very deep here Ridah. This poem has echoes of Rimbaud.10

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