Saturday, February 16, 2008

Mist And Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

On that day when winter's veil had lifted and the brightness rushed Back in.
We found a misty land, where we laughed at time and talked of the Cosmos and a billion suns.
We stood there stoney still, cemented.
We heard the sea, smelled and drank it in and we said no words.
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Mick Law
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Sue Crocker 19 March 2008

This is beautiful. You certainly put a lot of emotion and desire into this. I applaud you. Sue x

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Mary Gordley 16 February 2008

Delightful, you let us in on that special part of your life. Thanks for calling to mind my own memories of when 'he and me' first knew 'we were we'.

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Tai Chi Italy 16 February 2008

This is an adorable moment in your time Mick! So full of everything that love binds with...it brought a tear for those times, I had almost forgotten. Love is a wonderful thing and makes your poem sing...smiling at you, Tai

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Mick Law

Mick Law

Thurnscoe South Yorkshire, UK
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