Tuesday, April 19, 2022

Mist Comments

Rating: 5.0

As my days come to a close
and the gloom comes creeping in
I hear the dust calling out to me,
"It time to shed your skin"
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Bill Cantrell
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There are so many beautiful lines in this well thought out write with crystalline images. Loved the opening lines. Very touching. To my Poem List.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2022

This is an excellent poem dear friend.. well penned....5 stars

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Trevor Holmes 19 April 2022

An interesting take on death.

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Peter Aldissara 19 April 2022

Shed skin good poem.like long lizard insect

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