Sunday, November 15, 2020

Mist Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tortured soul
That lives alone,
Sees the Sea
But not its lofty foam
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Sandra Feldman
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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 November 2020

A well expressed poem.... Truly heartfelt and telling....5 stars *****

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 16 November 2020

A great awesome poem with the sea shore imagery metaphor wow. Soulful and touching. You expressed the feelings superbly. Kudos. Plz pleez do read my newest poem titled, " Babies cry anywhere "

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Yiyan Han 16 November 2020

Memories are much like a mist, ain't they.

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Varsha M 15 November 2020

And finally upon Life's jagged cliffs Of memories, They hope and pray For what no longer Can or ever, be That love so sadly lost, In life's white Mist, So suddenly...you captured emotions so well. Yes at times it seems difficult but true love withstand them all. Good poetry.

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