Mist Comments

A wonderful 'Mishty' (sweet) poem on mist.The two lines I particularly liked: 'Flowers were jealous seeing my colourful wings' - - and, 'Mist! ! I wish to be the scented breeze to dissolve and fade in you.'

When visibility is low in the mist one gets an opportunity to concentrate the beauty that is close to one's sight. During a mental mist we become capable of watching many hidden beauties of our friends and loved ones that one could not notice in the bright sun light. A lovely and impressive poem by Rini Shibu.

A Very Beautifully Written, Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ And Gorgeous Photo! ! ! ! !

It is a brilliant poem on love, friendship and nature with stunning and amusing expression. Let me quote some lines here.... Your invisible touch refreshed me. The gently scented breeze filled me with energy. Caterpillar turned to butterfly. Flowers were jealous seeing my colourful wings. They uttered the wind to take away the mist and clear the way. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thank u dear Rini, keep the ball rolling.

A humbled butterly...Beautiful! ...❤ Again, a big 10!

Very beautiful and emotional poem. This poem was written with a lot of feeling.

I returned to them. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.