Saturday, June 14, 2014

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rising up from the water
on this hazy dawn
the call of the geese
fluttering only inches above water
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Penni Currie
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Colleen Courtney 14 June 2014

What a beautiful poem this is on the transition from Summer to Autumn. Fall is also my favorite season and the great visual imagery you've given this poem are the reasons why! Adding to my favorites so can envision this beautiful scene again and again!

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A good nature poem and it is wonderfully written which is a success I think.

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