Mississippi Limerick Comments

solly, no speek engeleese, only Chinese, but velly good poem, I thinkie?

getting melons from felons...now I'll have to see that, Herbert! (not that I don't believe you!) : -) I saw the llamas eatin' their pajamas, too!

I like this one almost as much as like the longer version....good write!

This is a great 'short-version' of your longer poem. I think this is an excellent way to shorten it, although the longer one is good too. Sincerely, Mary