Friday, November 14, 2008

Missions Of Love. Comments

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God bless their invincible smiles, endorsing
Compassionate vigour for drying such
Torrents of miserable tears, which coursing
Down young frightened faces, make hands clutch
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Fay Slimm
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Kevin Wells 07 December 2008

Thanks for reminding us that there are good and generous people in the world but why must these issues always be left to the good graces of charity? The question is rhetorical, of course. The answer lies in the equation; Greed outweighs need.

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Martin Swords 29 November 2008

Fay........ .....Finding lost lambs everywhere...... is a lovely phrase central to this poem and subject. Difficult balance to get right......less sugar....not too sweet......getting the Goldilocks point........just right. Like writing about Motherhood.....you can't be against it.........but you can be too sweetly for it. Thanks Martin

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Lynda Robson 14 November 2008

A wonderfully written tribute to all those people who do such good work, thank you for reminding us all, 10 Lynda xxx

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Fiona Davidson 14 November 2008

Beautifully written piece makes me stop and think about the world and it's cruelty...thank you

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 November 2008

Tom says it here, missions of love should be all year... Andrew 10

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Tom Balch 14 November 2008

A lovely caring piece, well written Fay.10/10 regards Tom

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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