I just want to say
I think of you most every day
Whether you hear from me, or not.
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But there will come a day When I can finally say, hooray! My chores are done. Come here, big shot! ... Yes free time must come...thanks
A very astute comment, Louis. Sometimes they don't recognise that they are missing it, until it is absent. Then, they notice. Thank you for your keen observation!
The person you are missing is very lucky indeed. At least they are remembered and not forgotten. Very nice.
Thank you, Ray. Hopefully, men recognise when they are thought of, and know that they are lucky.
Really good last stanza, it brings a happiness and joy to your poem.
It has a nice flow to it. The rhythm and rhyme are enjoyable. A fun read. Keep Writing! ! !
Your thought gives a big calling effect in mind. Missing a friend painful but still we hope the friend will come with great joy. An excellent emotional poem is beautifully penned.10
" But there will come a day...When I can finally say, hooray! " HOORAY to you on this poem. Th.x P.
Thank you, Thomas, for your " hooray" , and for becoming a new fan! : -)