As the silence crept inside my room
And loneliness surrounded me
My eager eyes searched for you
I am missing you…
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Poem 'Missing You..' is nicely envisioned. Deep feeling, good word choice. A beautiful poem, many thanks.
Wipe this darkness of loneliness And fill in music of love, Can’t bear this pain any longer, I am missing you….so nice line build the line 'to feel fine that shall be built on no guilt i miss but remember each moment to feel absent
Wipe this darkness of loneliness And fill in music of love, Can’t bear this pain any longer, I am missing you…...nice lines miss not as we not caught yet in public eye let us try we shall build and yield to each others desire where u shall always admire
this is wonderful.... i understand the feeling behind it.... keep them coming! ! ! ! ! !
O! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! My gosh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Geeta, yeh kitna shaandaar likha hai tumne..........buck up...do keep posting such types of poem.........OOOOOOO....so lovely...... bye with regards, Luv, Mahfooz.
And color my dreams with joy, ienhoy your poem