Wednesday, May 4, 2016

Missing You Comments

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Missing you,
I missed a part of me
I shared with you
that's now gone.
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Kamand Kojouri
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Kim Barney 06 May 2016

Very well done. Rhymes are not always necessary and some poems are better without. Better no rhymes than ones that seem forced.

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Kamand Kojouri 19 June 2016

Thank you, Kim. I definitely agree with you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 May 2016

Missing you I shouldn't be. But I can't help missing who I was with you. a very well expressed poem of love, breaking up, the pain, the suffering, the illusion, love is always a mystery. th ank you for this beautiful poem . tony

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Kamand Kojouri 19 June 2016

Thank you for your kind words, Dr. Tony.

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Musawir Raakh 04 May 2016

Good1, keep it up, try to compose it in rhymes, it would add charm to your compositions

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Kamand Kojouri 19 June 2016

Thank you very much, Musawir. I'll keep that in mind.

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