Missing you,
I missed a part of me
I shared with you
that's now gone.
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Missing you I shouldn't be. But I can't help missing who I was with you. a very well expressed poem of love, breaking up, the pain, the suffering, the illusion, love is always a mystery. th ank you for this beautiful poem . tony
Good1, keep it up, try to compose it in rhymes, it would add charm to your compositions
Very well done. Rhymes are not always necessary and some poems are better without. Better no rhymes than ones that seem forced.
Thank you, Kim. I definitely agree with you.