Tuesday, January 24, 2012

Missing You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do my hands shake just a little
When your side leaves mine for a while?
Why does my heart break just a little
When you take away your smile?
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Lisa Pringle
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Malini Kadir 24 March 2012

I too would like to think it is love..............

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Malini Kadir 24 March 2012

I too would like to think it is love..............

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Lisa Pringle 23 March 2012

Thank you Robert. I like to think that I was in love and not obsessed. How does one really know the difference?

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Robert Green 23 March 2012

Simplistic, but a wonderful portrayal of love. Excellent

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Lisa Pringle 20 March 2012

Thank you all for your feedback. If my words move you, then I am on the right track. Thank you once again.

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Zibele Mrasi 26 January 2012

Hard thing to write about to me wow I give it to

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Pheko Motaung 25 January 2012

This poem made me feel good about the world again.Thank you very much

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Hope Anderson 25 January 2012

this is a great poem lisa......

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 24 January 2012

Wow! this poem is awesome, keep it up Lisa..

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Lisa Pringle

Lisa Pringle

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